Wednesday, September 13, 2006

Through the Window


A mile beyond the wood-pained glass
Amidst tall glistening intimidating grass
There stands a boy with half-open arms
Meandering in his own hesitant charms
His face bares all, his eyes hide some,
His hands reach out, his feet are numb
He's ready to take off, but anchored well
A cheetah's blood in a turtle's shell
And the pastures swaying in the breeze
Make him feel like fallen trees
Yet there's a drive, but questions too many
The answers are expensive, and he hasn't a penny
Perhaps, there's hope, his head rises high
He refuses to give up, but maybe he's shy
He wants to write, but he wants to read
He wants to force, but he has to plead
There are tears across a pitiful face
Yet he exudes a fighter's grace
Cuts and bruises across a torn chest
and marks of subdued, but raring zest
Forgiveness on his forehead, a master's trait
But fear and suspicion for every mate
Pain in every anxious wait
For turns that turn up in his fateful fate
I see a mile of freshness stale
Sad happiness, and brightness pale
I see him distinctly, and I have a fair view
But, maybe it's a mirror I'm looking into.
Maybe, it's a mirror I'm looking into.

14 comments:

Anonymous said...

Good one, Keep writing.

Anonymous said...

Dear beta, I can't say what prompted you writing this beautiful poem and also do not know what I interpreted is right? But your poems pierce the core of the heart. Seems you read deeply into the eyes of the people and try to frame your thought well in the form of poems. Here its good that it has a happy ending. Keep it up.

DewdropDream said...

Abhi (I hope you don't mind me addressing you like that) this is a masterpiece of a poem... i doubt you'd really be looking for praise for the poem, the search is on for something else i suppose.. i can't add anything more really, so i'll just wish you luck in all your endeavours

Monica said...

Yes, he will surely rise,
The young boy who seems so wise!
Though never have I known you,
Your poetry reflects the inner you!

Look again into the mirror son,
Smile at that boy who'll one day run,
The world will then be at your feet,
Through thick or thin, you'll never retreat!

The fire in your belly,
The zest in your mind,
Will take you ahead,
Leaving the world behind!!

Look again through that window,
The beautiful valley and the green meadow,
That world out there is yours to take,
Go ahead young man, leave nothing to stake!!

DewdropDream said...

why have you disappeared??? where have you disappeared???hope your exams were good... and hope to hear from you soon!! Tc.. all the very best!!!

Shitij said...

awsome poem..

keep writing dude,,

Shitij said...

yups.. thats me, just happened to see your comment on my blog..

:P

Anonymous said...

beautifully put .....chetah's blood in a turtle shell.......
gr8 peice indeed.......

Dhruv Varma said...

this is 1 f the most fabulous poems ive ever read....although i hav little interest in poetry but amongst all d poems ive read dis seems 2 be really wonderfuly written and .........i dunno wt 2 say......simply marvellous.....keep going dude....u may becum d next wordsworth!!!!!!!

impressionist said...

thanks to all:

papa, mummy, dewdrop, monica, shitij, anon and dhruv..

thanks a lot for the encouragement.

Babitha Marina Justin said...

lovely poem. i just came across it accidently. its a simple, direct poem free of artistic pretensions and embellishments. write on... may i take the liberty to visit the blog more often. im more or less a virtual traveller :-)

Dheeraj Luthra said...

Actually good ..
a min has passed n i m still lost in it.

I Am said...

i wonder why you wrote this..
but it was a delight to read...
im super elated..
*rolls eye*
thnx!

Anonymous said...

Enchanting...